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0 && image.height>0){if(image.width>=700){this.width=700;this.height=image.height*700/image.width;}}" border=0>A reply to Laura
Dear Laura:
I’m happy to receive your letter. Daming is my good friend. He told me about you on the phone. Itisreallykindofhimtointroduceustoknoweachother.(He introduced we know that’s great)! And I want to be your friend. because we are all britain(british). I miss England very much (well). but now, IlikeChina,too (
China is also let me like).In China, there are lots of beautiful places. The most (first) famous place is the Great Wall. It’s about six thousand seven hundred kilometers long. When I climbed the Great Wall, I was so surprised! becausetheancientGreat Wall is so long (and old)! It looks like the Chinese dragon !
I have a pair of chopsticks, too. I can use them very well. because Daming used it to teach (taught) me how to eat(ate) Chinese food. I have lived in China for two years. I think I love China now.
You live in America for a long (along) time .Have you got some books about America? I want to read some American books ,but I haven’t got any American book. Can you give me one? I’m very thankful (thank you)!
I miss you .And I miss Daming,too.Please write to me and we are pen friends.
Wish you happy every day!
Love from
Your dear friend :Amy
翻译:给罗拉的一封回信
亲爱的罗拉:
非常高兴收到你的来信。大明是我的好朋友,他在电话里告诉了我关于你的情况,他介绍我们认识真是太好了!我也很想成为你的好朋友,因为我们都是英国人。我非常想念英国,但是中国也同样令我着迷。
在中国,有许多美丽的景点,其中最著名的要数长城了,它有六千七百公里那么长呢。当我登上长城的时候,我非常惊讶,因为它是那么长,那么古老,就像中国龙一样!
我有一双中国筷子,我能非常熟练地使用它们。因为大明用它们教我吃中国饭菜。我在中国呆了两年了,我想我爱上中国了。你在美国居住有一段时间了,有关于美国的书籍吗?
我非常想读关于美国的书,可是我没有任何美国的书籍,你可以给我带一本来吗?非常感谢。
我想你,也想念大明。请写信给我,我们是朋友。
祝你开心每一天!
你亲爱的朋友:
埃米
自评:在此特别感谢孙老师的指导!这是笛子英语班的作文,经过校讯通孙老师的指导以后,作了进一步的修改,红色字体是修改后添加的部分,括号里的蓝色字体是需要删除的,还请大家多多支持和提出宝贵意见,您的指导是对笛子进步的支持,O(∩_∩)O谢谢!