关键词： 修改 friend 初中初一
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My best friend
My best friend is Zhang Xuyang . She is my close friend.
She has got a white face. Her face is as beautiful as a flower. She has got a pair of light and big eyes. There is a small and lovely nose in the middle of her face. And there is a pink and small mouth under her nose.
She likes smiling very much. When she is smiling, （When she was smiling,） her eyes looks like two small boat. She is good at singing and dancing. but her favourite hobby is travelling. So am I. We have the same hobby.（Our favourite hobby is so same.）
Last year, we went to Xi’an with our parents. Xi’an is a beautiful city. It has a heavy and long history. There are lots of beautiful places. We played very happy. In the evening, we watched TV、played computer games (played on computer )and read lots of interesting books in the hotel.
The next day (Tomorrow) we went to the most famous place—the Terracotta Warriors (the terracotta warriors.)
There were many people visiting the Terracotta Warriors. They are from different countries. such as the UK, America, Japan, Russia……
(There are many people visited the terracotta warriors. They were from different countries. They are English、American Japanese、Russian……)
Zhang Xuyang and I talked with the foreigners very friendly. ( Zhang Xuyang and I talked to English and American very friendly.)And we took pictures with them. We had a good and unforgettable time （in ）there.
When she is playing with me, she is very happy! So（am） do I.
This is my best friend—Zhang Xuyang. Do you like her?
翻译：我的好朋友
我的好朋友是张徐洋,她是我的密友。她面庞白皙，就像一朵美丽的花朵。她有一双明亮的大眼睛，一个小巧可爱的鼻子占据了脸蛋的正中央，在她的鼻子下面，有一张粉红色的小嘴巴。
她十分爱笑，当她微笑的时候，她的眼睛就像两只弯弯的小船，她非常擅长于唱歌和跳舞。但是她最喜欢的爱好是旅游。我也爱旅游，我们的爱好是如此一致。
去年，我们一起去西安旅游，西安是一个美丽的城市，它有一段厚重而悠久的历史。这里有许多美丽的景点。我们玩得很开心。在晚上，我们在宾馆里看电视、上网冲浪，还看了许多有趣的图书。
第二天一大早，我们就去最著名的景点——兵马俑参观。
有许多人都来参观兵马俑，他们来自不同的国家，如英国人、美国人、日本人、俄罗斯人……
我和张徐洋与外国人进行了非常愉快的交谈。我们还和他们合影留念。我们非常高兴.当我们在一起玩的时候，她很开心，我也一样。
这就是我的好朋友——张徐洋，你喜欢她吗？
自评：这是我在校讯通孙老师的指导下，把英语作文又修改了一番，蓝色字体是修改前需要删除掉的，红色字体是修改后的。希望大家多多指导，O(∩_∩)O谢谢！请大家一人吃一个冰激凌，祝大家清凉一夏哦！